Monday, 25 August 2014

Little white riding bunny!

Once upon a time there was a bunny called Bunbun and his mum Lili. They lived in a cage. On a fine, sunny day Bunbuns mum shouted " Bunbun come here please" "yes mum"his mum explained. "Bunbun you need to give water, a knife and a cracker to Granny.She is really sick so goooooooooooooooooo"" Ok!! mum" "but be careful there is a new predator. Tan tan tan!!!!!!!!!!!!! So be careful!" "Ok bye mum!"so he went out of the cage and walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk,walk and walked until BOOM!
"The Human"he screamed. The Human saw the food and chased Bunbun! The Human went in front of Bunbun. Bunbun grabbed the knife and stabbed the Human on the foot and ran away with the knife!
When Bunbun arrived at Granny's cage he gave her the water, the crackers and the knife. Then he giggled "the red on the knife is jam!!" Said Bunbun . "Yum" said Granny and they all had a very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very and very interesting life!

By:JEANNE
THE END


Location:Cage and house!

2 comments:

  1. Awesome work Jeanne, tres bien! I like how you made the wolf a human!

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  2. very dramatic, in a good way!

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