It was a stormy black night on a creepy midnight and a cheerful king and a brave boy were playing Cluedo in a red palace when suddenly .... A man swooshed in, put black hoods on them ,turned the boy and king round and round then took them into a silver helicopter. He took them to a dimly lit cave.They couldn't see but they knew where they were: a dimly lit cave.How could they escape?
The cave was as black as a bull,like a grave yard.They were thinking about food when ...the cave door opened and a ruby red chef was standing there looking nervous!! Ha ha said the boy.
The brave boy grabbed the king, grabbed the rolling pin, stuck it in the ground, used it to jump over the chef then stabbed him in back.He was a super sweaty boy!!
Just then the fierce fighting Queen came in with a sharp bladed dagger .She stabbed 3 guards then led them to a posh pool to hide. why are we going here ? the boy tried to say but the queen ignored him.
The guards chased them.. the boy had prepared. He tied a bucket to someone's hand and he told them if they entered move your hand upside down. And if they entered a mechanical hand would reach down and open their mouth, and charcoal would fall into their mouths.
They entered, charcoal got dropped into their mouths, yuck!!! They squealed.
HA ha they choked and spluttered. Cough cough.Our plan worked , but they got back up o-h Wait!! 3 CHEERS FOR THE TRAP!!!! Thanks now , shouted the queen . RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!
GET READY yelled the queen.They grabbed black and red pistols , white skinny daggers, newly sharpened spare knives, and green reflecting swords.Ching Chang bash clang went the battle!!
At the end of the brutal battle the king and queen and all the guards were dead ,but the boy had survived, with 18 scars and 28 cuts!! What a brutal fight!!
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AWESOME story harry! its one of my favorites!
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ReplyDeleteGreat use of adjectives Harry. you really set the scene well at the beginning. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI like how u described the really good parts,cheerful,stormy,black,creepy,dimly lit cave,ruby red, and way, way, way, way, way, more!
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